Quit half way, the renders are good (even thought the character design is not that sexy) and the premise is good too. However I don't find the game sexy.
The dialogues are boring and long and the way the characters act seems really artificial.
I'd suggest making the game's flow faster. Drop more text instead of those one liners, unless those are just images popping up, if they are I'd suggest changing to a text window like many other games use.
I feel like I have no power of decision along the game, being constantly led through something in a slow way.
I'm sorry I didn't get to see the rest and maybe the game picks up there, but I just sense there's more senseless clicking coming.
You have a good concept and good art. You just need to fix the way in which you deliver it.
Keep it up!
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